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Last year ,My father and i went to Bodrum .
While we were playing beach volleyball i fall down and broke my leg . Someone called the amblance and we went to hospital . I had a painful leg . (bu cümleden emin değilim )
Doctors said : You are good , fortunately your leg was injured.I immoblized my leg for they fastened a splint .
Pek doğru olmayabilir , 2dakika da yaptım .
splash a söyle o yardım eder doğru bir şekilde
ben de mutofrans'ınkini degistirip yazdim
Last year my father and I went to Bodrum
While we were playing beach volleyball i fell down and broke my leg.It was painful. Then, someone called the ambulance and we went to nearest hospital in the area
Doctor said: Fortunately its not that bad. I fastened a splint so i could immobilize your leg. may you recover soon.
dogru oldugunu dusunuyorum=)
Verilen örnek metinlerde belirgin grammar hataları bulunmakta.(özellikle reported speech kısmında) Ve de okuyunca çok,nasıl denir bilmiyorum,değişik geldi kulağıma.
Örnek olarak; ''
As i was playing beach volleyball at the area known as 'voleyball court',because of the big stone which was under the sand, i tripped and fell.So,someone,who saw me fall, called the ambulance to pick me up to the hospital,which is away to the place where we were playing volleyball.Due to my painful screams,my father thought that my leg was broken,and i also thought the same thing,but fortunately,it wasn't broken at all. The doctor immobilized that there was no need to fasten a splint because he told me that my leg wasn't broken..Anyway,the day really was awful,and i'll never-ever forget it.I hope,i won't have a day like this one,either.''
slapdash bence yazilan biraz basit olmali. sonucta arkadasin ingilizcesi pek iyi degil ki burada yardim istemis. hocasi sonra bunu sen mi yazdin demesin=)